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Tuesday, December 3, 2019

Insert from FreeLand Part 3 - Baron's Boy

Chapter 19
It was the darkest of the nights. We wanted it just like that. I remember. I remember as if it is happening to me right now.
They were all around me. The sixteen of hand-picked men that formed Force Recon Unit. Some ex-Navy Seals, some battle-hardened Marines, all mercilessly trained to successfully complete whatever job is asked from them to do.
The mountain range in Afghanistan. The bitter coldness of the night that nibbed on my nose.
The offensive on the nearby town held by the Taliban happened yesterday. The whole place was going to be overrun in the next few days by Afghan Government forces. Taliban will run. Their commanders will retreat. We had our info.
So, we got us placed along the only paved road curving itself through the mountain rocks and leading west toward more mountains and Pakistan. And waited.
The ambush point was picked perfectly. We studied the terrain and the roads with carts and videos, and after a long analysis, a few good options presented themselves. I suggested the one before the road leaving the town forked into two different paths, one paved and one unpaved. We could never be sure that they would not just take the unpaved road to get lost.


The spot was on a minor hill plateau. A steep curve up the front that would make the vehicles slow down. Then, an open space of about a hundred meters. One side of the road was slightly elevated but it was relatively flat.
Also, there was not a steep drop off on the other side of the road like in most other places along its treacherous winding. I really wanted not to have a stiff cliff dive. I did not want anyone to have a chance to jump down. Maybe the jump would have killed them and maybe it would not. I just did not want to take any chance since there is no way I would send any of my men to risk their lives unnecessarily. We lived with more than enough risk as it was.
My inscrutable crew hid so well I could not see them even as I knew exactly where each and every one of them was stationed at.
The idea was not to use high-power explosives or anything dramatic. This was an asset acquisition mission after all. But I agreed with my Captain when he said that no asset will be acquired if it meant taking unnecessary risks. In other words, let's not blow everything up - that could be done from the air any time of a day - but play it safe nevertheless.


The picture of the Afghan mountain range:



The vehicles were targeted to be blocked and stopped by our arm's gunfire. They were not supposed to pass us through. If for some miracle we all missed and they did get through, we had a safety-net solution. The backup was the twin of roadside mines positioned before the road curves itself to the left again. Those remotely activated explosives can take apart anything that comes their way, no matter how thick their vehicles might be reinforced. I knew it was overkill, but better be safe than sorry. An acceptable margin of error on a mission like this was zero.


Still, as I looked around, the set up was not making sense here. We were without close-by air support and I could not see clearly beyond the curve. We would not know what is coming our way before they get here.
I do not like this, Beamer,” I told my commanding officer, a guy only a year older than me but with enough experience and intelligence to know to listen to an opinion of a sergeant like myself.
"What you do not like about this? You yourself suggested for us to be here." He hated those last-minute changes. I do not blame him.
Yeah… Still, it just does not sit right.”
"There are plenty of big rocks to hide behind. We have enough power to take care of any problem that comes our way."
It’s not that. I feel blind. We won’t know what to expect.”
The info seemed solid.”
Yeah, until it isn’t.”
So… What then?”
I looked around for a moment and knew what had to be done.
They already left the town, Sergeant,” he tells me. “We can expect them any minute here. Whatever you want, do it fast.”
Sam and Butter,” I called two members of our team. “Head out beyond the curve, 2 miles up, and then climb the hill.”
Yes, Sir.”
Take a pair of AT4s with you,” I tell them, pointing to the two M136 AT4 shoulder-fired rocket launcher that lay with the rest of the equipment. “But use them only as a backup. And keep the com line open. Let us know what you see. And… if anything turns around, you get it. You understand?”
Yes, Serg.”
Nothing goes back.”
Yes, Serg. It will be done.”
Is that all?” Beam looked at me as I still had my doubts.
Ramsey?”
Yes, sir.”
Head the other way. Behind the rock there, on the other side of the road, before the other curve. You sniper them down if they try to hide behind the cars.”
Even back then, Ramsey did not like me very much, and a year later it proved that he had every right to feel like that. So, he looked at Beamer and only after our commanding officer nodded his head did he say, “Yes, Sir,” before he took his gear and headed down the straight stretch of the road.
You happy now?” Beamer asked me as I watched him go.
I’ll be happy when we have a few of those fellas inside our holding cells.”
Beamer chuckles. Good old Beamer. I wished I did not disappoint him so very much.


We took our spots then and the waiting game started. The game did not last that long. Even we could see them from far away.
They traveled heedlessly with the lights on their cars turned on. Not much they could have done on a night like this unless they wanted to us night-goggles. It was just too damn dark to navigate the treacherous mountain road with only a sparse light of the cloud-dimmed stars. We had info that they acquired night-vision through the black market. So, why not use it here and now?


What do you see?”
"There are… six vehicles there. I repeat - I confirm six vehicles there… Confirming their make. The first one is… White Toyota Tacoma."
Heavily armed in the back?”
No. See nothing in its back.”
How tight are they packed?” our Captain asked.
Can’t tell from here. But they drive close to each other. Speed, twenty miles per hour. You have a few minutes still.”
Okay, you keep on watching down that road. Let us know if you see anything coming behind them. You know the drill.”
Yes, sir. We’ll do that. Out.”
In a minute, they were back with new info, “The cars are packed, six, eight people per car,” came the info from our scouts. “Expected arrival, two minutes at present speed.”


"Waiting for your order, Commander," I said as I tried to take in a few deep, calming breaths.
Nobody moved, the noise of the slowly approaching cars the only noise interrupting the night. I pulled down my night-vision goggles and scouted the area again. I could see no heat signatures around except those in the cars. And there were plenty of them there.
We waited for the cars to come next to us.


We knew what we were doing. Six snipers, six drivers. Those were our primary targets. We were pretty certain that no high Taliban commander would be driving their own car. It was safe to take them all out. All six of our snipers, together with our commander, were positioned along the road, on elevated spots, about a hundred meters up.
I was in the assault part of the team. Six of us hiding behind the big rocks, trying to conceal our presence in case they used nigh-vision. We were the main firepower, the main assault, and the cleanup crew.
I hoped that if we get in a jam, Ramsey could cut them down from the left flank and if anyone tried to run down the slope away from the road, we could incapacitate him rather easily that way. It was as good plan as any.
The biggest threat was the friendly crossfire so the six of us next to the road were not supposed to get even close to the vehicles, not after the firing was all done.


Strange thing is, that what happens in those thirty or forty seconds you think about for years and years on, some would say, for the rest of your life.
"The first car is ready to make the curve," announced our spotters. All six of us had to be hidden behind and I did not dare even take a sneak peek at them.
Let them come, I thought. I’ll see them plenty really fast.
When the last car was announced to have made the curve, the first car had already passed my spot. I was in the middle so it was working out perfectly.
I counted my breaths, holding my MK18 retracted close-quarters assault weapon in both hands, my right index finger caressing the side part of the trigger. Soon, soon, I was going to press it and then the death was to come out of it.
The wheels of the third vehicle roam past me.
"Fire!" our CO suddenly announced and then the whole hell broke loose.



Tuesday, November 26, 2019

Insert from FreeLand Part 2

Insert from FreeLand Part 2...



...What brings me around is a loud bang of metal against metal. I open my eyes and realize that my reality has not changed. But I feel better, almost rested. I take in a deep breathe and decide that things have not changed and that it's better for the air to come through my mouth.
I see the imp in the corner playing with a big pot on a stove.
Sorry, did I wake you?” he says apologetically, but I bet he banged that thing against the stove on purpose. The only question is for how long was he banging it before I finally woke up.
His slick smile is trying to cover his cunning. “Care for some tea? I was going to have some myself,” he says innocently.
I yawn and look through the window. The sun is high up. It must be late in the morning already.
"Tea...? Sure. As long as it has some caffeine inside. I’ll take whatever can get me up and fill my belly."
"Caffeine... do not know what that is."
"Sure you don't."
"This is just some dried lemongrass that can clear your mind and get your body going."
"Oh, if that is how it is, then I'll take double."
He pours some dark green liquid into an old half-cracked ceramic bowl. I try it and it's not bad at all. Citrusy. Not quite like a lemon but close enough.
I sit there against the wagon's wall and nurse my coup and he is waiting for me to say something, but I want to get my thoughts in order first.
So, I am back at the camp. Will I ever be able to get away from it? The thought is very disturbing.
But in a minute, as the liquid hits my stomach, I feel better.
Matrix my ass. I smile as I think I’ve finally figured out where I’m at. It all downed at me as I was taking the tea refill. For one, I was right. It’s impossible that I’m under the influence of some drug. This tea has the flavor I never had before. My mind would not do that to me. Besides, it's been two full days and the drug would wear off by now. It’s been two busy days of running around.
And there is a continuation in my daily activity. No interruptions that is so common during the hallucinations. I did not jump from one place to another. I had actually walked for hours on hours, one fuckin' step at a time. I could not have been under the influence of any mushroom, even if it is some experimental genetically-modified type.
Also, it’s impossible to be in an AI-controlled matrix-type of reality. My surroundings, everything I see and have seen here, all of it… it’s just too original, too creative. Too imaginative. I would not think machines could program themselves to do that. Not the machines I know of. No. It would be completely illogical. It would not make sense. No, it’s not Matrix and I’m no Neo. I’m sure of it because… I really think I know what happened to me.
As I watched the water pour into my glass and how it spinning around, it all came to me. I fell somehow in some kind of a vortex, some space-shit-time-transfer gate and now I’m somewhere in the universe were there are people like me but… not really like me. It's a place with twisted reality, someplace among stars where they copied the things us humans do but in not such a perfect manner. And falling through that wormhole or vortex or gate or whatever it was, all of that took years of my life I cannot remember. Yeah… that would make everything fit in.
That must be it. But… How do they speak fuckin' English? Is it true that it is a universal language because it is really universal??? No fucking way!!! Or maybe the vertex only likes English-speaking folks. That could be it. We always prided ourselves at being pioneers. Why the heck not now?


I take a closer look at the imp. There is a smart man there, hidden beyond the appearance of an obvious physical limitation and disability. Ever since I watched Tyron Lancaster, I always wanted to get to befriend one of them shorties. I know, it might not be politically correct to refer to them in such a manner, but hey, this is my mind. I can say whatever I want.
And I say I want to have a friend! One that can defend a whole city if needs be, and drink like a ship’s captain working for an oil company and fuck whores, and kill… Well, I don’t know if I would ever kill my father. I first would have to remember his face. Shit. My head hurts again. It seems that the place in my memory reserved for my family is now only inhabited with stabbing pain.
So, I choose to look at this little guy and think about him standing on the tall ice wall, pissing down on the whole world below. This one is cunning too. To be able to survive for as long as he has been, you have to be cunning. Maybe even ruthless. He certainly appears benevolent. Maybe that’s part of his cunning. Really, I do not know how wise it is for me to confide in anyone around here.
But I have to risk, so I've decided to open up. “Look, I have to tell you the truth.”
That got his interest really good. “I’m kind of lost here,” I say it but from the impression of his face is not like I’m telling him anything he does not know already. “I need to find some answers. I need to find out what the hell is going on with me and with everything around here.”
I know,” he says and nods his head in affirmation. “But there is very little we can all do for you here.
I can see that. But I still need to find some answers.”
Well, maybe I can help you with that… in a way,” he says carefully, obviously weighing each and every word he says. “Maybe the best way to find the answers, the only way, is to go to Swine Settlement and see what you can find there.”
Swine Settlement? Does it have a lot of pigs there?”
No, no it doesn't. It used to, but there are actually not that many pigs there anymore,” he says with a remorse in his voice.
I see. The pigs are gone and only the name remains.”
Yes. It’s sort of like a trading post that we free folks go to. There we can exchange goods and buy the food and supplies we need.”
I see. And there might be someone who can help me?”
The best bet would be to talk to Old Diamer. If anyone around here can help you with the information you seek, he is the man. He knows everything.”
I see. And how do I find him?”
He’s the owner of Old Diamer's Dinner there. He knows everything that passes through this land.”
And how do I get there?”
"You can walk there. It will not take you more than two days. Just take the road up north and then when you hit the old dead oak tree, you take the road to your right, walk for another half a day, cross Stinky… it’s a river, but very shallow… You can just walk over it. It should not be more than a waist-deep, but be careful. When you get out, check you do not have any bloodsuckers on your body. Or you can actually walk to Billard’s Wines and take a raft there to cross it. Yes, that would be better. It will not cost you much to cross it. A quarter of baron will do. This time a year, the river will be fast and deep. So you will definitely need a raft to cross it.”
That seems doable.” Is he trying purposely to make it sound difficult?
Yes. Very doable. There might be some bandits on the road, so it’s better to walk during the night. But then, you may not realize where you’re and end up lost…”
Okay… I see where this is going.
But you know, I can help. We were going to Swine Settlement to trade the rugs we made. We were going to get us a horse or a cow at least. It would be too complicated to go all the folks here, too difficult to move all those wagons without horses. So, I was going to go there myself with another fella, just with the cart. Maybe you can come along and then I can show you the way.”
Of course, that was his idea all along. With me around to protect him, he would not need to worry about any bandits. I do not blame him, except…
And you are sure that this Old Diamer can help me?”
Yes,” he says swiftly, and I realize he’s desperately wanting me to go with him.
He knows everyone around here. If anyone can help you…”
Okay. But since you want me to come with you, I have a few requests…”
But…” he was going to say something but then looked in my eyes and realized that I have him figured out.
You have to promise me that you will not lie to me. I’ll help you get to that town. But you will not lie to me. Ever. Or try to deceive me in any manner. If you need a favor, just say it. Don't fucken play mind games with me. Okay? Do yo agree?”
It’s agreed,” he says readily and shakes my hand right away. I sigh. I do not know what I got myself into. I figure that I was his only choice. I am rather certain that probably nobody was ready to go with him to this Swine Dine place. How bad can it be to go on the road there? Worse than conimen? Probably so.
He is ready to run and tell all the folks that he has me hooked, but before he leaves, he turns around and just to make sure that he actually got a deal, tells me, “We can leave tonight then.”
No…” I tell him and see his face turn to worry and disappointment. But I sort of like the little fella, so I do not let him simmer for too long and quickly add. “I’d like to leave as soon as I eat something. No need to waste any time.”
That puts a big grin on his face and he says readily, “I’ll get you something good to eat then.”
Good. I bet I’m not getting worms and bugs this time.



Sunday, November 24, 2019

Some Q&A by J. Remark

If you were wondering...

Why are you books of smaller volume?
I find it easier to publish my work in parts as I go along, finishing each part that has anywhere between hundred and two hundred pages every few weeks.  I usually like to rewrite what I wrote and that is much easier for me to do with documents that are smaller than larger.  Also, once I publish my work I can then concentrate on the next part without having to worry too much about my last work. So, I found I am more productive chipping on a smaller stone than trying to create a colossal work with thousands of pages. Eventually I plan to combine parts that are connected into larger books.

How many parts will there be in Rainbow System?
Right now, I have outlined six parts, but that can change in the future. There are many readers, myself include, who hate to start reading a series that they do not know if it will ever be finished.  I plan to write differently.  I want to give a closure to the underlying issues every few stories.  So, readers will not be reading five books without having the answers to the mystery that was started on the page one.  So, I will answer all the questions and provide closure as I go along.  At the same time, I intend to expand the scope of Rainbow System to my liking and will probably make it more complex and vast in the books to come.  Depending on the surrounding conditions, I would love to add at least fifty stories inside Rainbow System during my writing career.

When is your next book coming out?
The schedule of my planned publishing is posted here. 

Monday, November 18, 2019

FreeLand Book 1 is now out! Check out when the Book 2 will be out.

The start of the series set in a Steampunk reality, a dystopian world  where the land is divided between barons, where life is cheap and technology isn't. 

I'm currently finishing Part 2 and that will be published rather soon, in a matter of next few days.  The second part is the direct continuation of the first part.  I even continued with the chapter count from the first part.  I'll provide links here once it's all out.

Future Publishing Schedule:
(In case I continue to write fast)

-December 15th, 2019 - Freeland, Part 3 - already have 20k words and have outlined the whole thing.  Will be probably north of 30k words long once it is finished

-January 15, 2020 - Story 2 - Kassandra's Run - in the process of finishing outlining the story  Plan to start filling its parts starting by December 1.

-February 1, 2020 - Story 3 - Trade Mission - have outlined it all and already have 5k words in it.  It will be probaly done in two or three parts, probably each part being published every two weeks.


I have already made a rough outline what I want Story 4 and 5 to be, but I do not want to go too far ahead.  Right now, the objective is to finish with FreeLand first and get Kasandra's Run going.

I plan to write this out no matter how well it is received by the public.  I hope to have at least 6 stories done by the end of 2020.


Freeland Part 1

Publishing the first part of Freeland.  The first book in the Rainbow Systems... more to come soon.